Summarize your comments.
i need to break up paragraphs more. i shouldn't haver really long paragraphs. my first paper i need to introduce the writers more to weave them in better into my paper . make sure to get others to proof read it.
what I'm doing well
i elaborate, explain, and use all the content well
what i can improve on.
little grammatical mustaches
weaving in other writes and their works better
shortening paragraphs
one thing i would like to improve on.
making sure all grammatical errors are corrected because i know how to wear writers in my paper better and i can work around that but i always seem to have problems with my grammar no matter how many times i read it.
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