questions about my paper in class

how i went  about writing this paper?
i typed the whole paper on my laptop.
i predominately worked on it in my dorm sitting on my bed
i wrote it in chunks such as first half and second half. i would revise it after we would go over it in class the next day the i would turn it in.
no one proof read it except for me which probably wasn't a smart chaise but everyone that i had that i would wan to read i was busy.
i added a picture, which is unlike anything else i have been doing but it seemed acceptable after talking in class about it.
it took me about three or four days total. i would work an the first half until i got that dine on one day.
i would write the last half the next day or whenever i felt necessary to continue. then would re read, edit, and revise my paper the next day. I actually ended up re reading this paper on a fourth day to see if i wanted to make any changes or if i had a different opinion on it.
the importance of the environment fro academic based writing?
if it is a week day, which most of the time it is, i write at about five sometimes six. it is normally after i shower and i have dinner cooking.  have to be in a desk, bed, or couch of some sort. so i can relax. most people would say that if they were to write their paper on a couch or bed that would make them tired and want to go to sleep. that in a way the case with me as well. I'm wide awake when i start to write my paper and then i will eat then go write some more on my paper. but once i start getting drowsy i do fall asleep. i cold keep myself up and write some more but i normally do not because this is when i make the most grammar mistakes and i try and keep those to a minimum. i do not typically write in the morning because i am still a bit tired and i like to relax in t he morning and i and have a cup of coffee.
what are other external factors that hinder or help my writing?
i do not like the tv to be only or music playing. The room doesn't have to be completely silent but i do like when it for the most part remotely quiet so i can hear my self thinking.
what do i think worked well in my paper?
i think my paragraph flow was decent. you could definitely tell what paragraph when where but i could still have improved that.
what are the weaknesses of the paper?
the grammar definitely needs some work. more cohesion in my conclusion to my paragraphs.
how well have i lived up to my index card?
my gramme has improved slightly, i feel like i flow better when i write. There is still plenty of room for improvement. as there will alway be. but i do feel like i making progress.